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This made me laugh so hard XD It was kind of hard to read, though, with all the crossed out stuff, but I read it anyway and it was really ...

I really like it! It's beautiful, and it has great attitude. I like how it talks about how you're not always going to be happy, but at the same time, ...

AAH! TWINNY, I LOVE IT

Hollow- Can you switch your girl to Roman? Thank you. Also, it's okay to have a detailed past with other characters, just remember to involve your character with the others. ...

Name: Madeline "Jinx" Hale Age (10-18): 15 Parents (Mortal and Godly): Apollo and Lilian Hale Appearance: Carmel-brown hair, green eyes. Jinx's hair reaches down just four inches past her shoulders. ...

This section was removed for spam. Do not quote the entire literary work when writing a review. -- Nate Dang, man. That was intense. And I LOVED IT! :) I ...

Hey, Anger :) All in all, good job. It's an interesting plot, and I like your character. 1. Waking up isn't a chore, staying awake is. When I open my ...

Sometimes it's like they're right there next to me and I have to wave them off because most of them are REALLY talkative.

I answered Pat Buchanon just because I thought it was funny :P But, no, I'm not writing a novel at the current time, thank you very much. :) Alas! Earwax!

Beautiful, just beautiful. I loved it. It was very inspiring, very wonderful. I can relate. I didn't find any nitpicks. If you ever catch the stardust, keep it in the ...

1. What Should be the name of the city Kickassy (Alias, Kirk McClancy) lives in? 2. What should be some of "Kirk"s powers? 3. What should his worst enemies do? ...

Wow! That was awesome! It was a good read, easy to understand, and the single nitpick I had was that it said, I struggled out of my mothers grasp instead ...

This is certainly something I can relate to... "I read your story," he says, grinning a little and giving a small chuckle. I nearly choke on my tea. I feel ...

So I'm sorry if it's terrible to read. Ohmygoshno! No way was this wonderful prose terrible to read! In fact, I do believe this is the best thing I've read ...

Well, someone had to say it! Nate is awesome, and you have accurately portrayed this in meaningful poetry. Awesome! :)