Hollieberry

Short and sweet. It's a cute little thing although the rhyming in the second line is a little dodgy. Yellow is feeling that blows the flowers doesn't really make sense ...

t's pretty but it seems to achieve little. The first stanza was promising and it really did start to develop an idea of character. Lying in my bed, wrapped gave ...

Pointless, maybe, but it gives me shivers. I think you've seized on a really good idea. The first stanza not only captures the idea of what one can express but ...

Does this really belong in dramatic poetry? It seems more lyrical to me based on Incandescence's description. It focuses on emotion without the action and events required to consider it ...

I don't do grammar stuff, mostly because I often make mistakes with my own grammar - lol! Ok, I'll start at the beginning. My first point is that the poem ...

This is my first review on the site. I'm trying to get a feel for what's on here and your poem's title caught my eye. Hopefully I can write something ...

I've always said defence, though strangely it's not something I've thought about before - how odd!

Hi, i've been on the site for about five minutes and I already thin it looks fanastic. I've never been part of a writing site before - i've just sent ...

Hi, my name's hollieberry and I found this site while looking for somewhere where I can talk to fellow writing enthusiasts. There seemsto be an awful lot going on around ...