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Hiroku

  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: United we Stand

    I'm sure someone might have suggested this, but something you could do is post it as a novel? If it has as many long chapters as your story has, it ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Other Re: Rain

    Being a dried out person who absolutely adores the rain, the title immediately caught my attention. As I read on through your story, the website popped in my head. After ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Addiction

    With all of the grammatical errors already mentioned above, I figure I'll just tell you that it was a great read. Now, I don't drink (too young and I hate ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Forbidden Love

    Now, I never EVER read poems (until now that is). I never liked them unless they were in the form of lyrics to a song. I'm not a poet, I ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Pulling the Trigger of Love - Prologue

    I'd like to thank everyone for their reviews! Kafka's review especially helped, and I'll take everything into consideration as I edit it over time. I will add more detail into ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Pulling the Trigger of Love - Prologue

    This is the prologue to a story I've been thinking of for the past few days after some recent events that have happened to me in the real world. I ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm new here and could use some help

    Hey thanks guys for the warm welcome and tips. I'll make sure to post my questions under Writer's Corner from now on. I'll be sure to review the suggested works ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm new here and could use some help

    Hey guys. I'm fairly new here. I have reviewed two stories so far (plan on doing more, of course) and am eager to start posting some parts of the novel ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Suicide

    This story amazes me. It's very well written, with a great plot and rather great dialogue. I'm used to stories that, at one point or another, announce the names of ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: In A Second

    I really like your style. You went from her PoV to his, and interconnected them very well. The story itself is really good, especially if this is your very first ...

    Aug 23, 2011


Powerful men have a way of avoiding consequences.
— Dr. Harrison Wells, The Flash