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A ripped parachute is a bad clone of the ground

Oooo! 5.10

I extremely dislike goodbyes. So much I was bawling as I wrote a sad separation in one of my own stories.

The Lion Sleeps Tonight ~ Lebo M. LoL!

Bore. :mrgreen:

You're ban for capitalizing your sentence. :twisted:

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Granted, but now you speak in a jumbled spree of nonsense nobody can understand! :shock: :mrgreen: I wish I owned a Krispy Kreme's Doughnut shop so I could eat them ...

A brief outline of Nekole =) Full Name: Nekole Maloom (Nee-Kole) Age (13-19): 15, turning 16 soon. Gender Female Nationality: Irish, but was born and raised in England. Appearance: She ...

Wade Blanchet I'm not too concerned about my future anymore when today's too precious to waste. Besides . . . I have enough on my plate with whatever bizarre madness ...

Thank you for the review, Carly =) I see what you mean in your critiques. 'Very helpful insight, I'll definately work some changes in. I wrote this for a writing ...

WoW! Kind of intense!? 'Really great story here, Carly! The beginning, opening with 'gaspy' and panicked sentences, I like. It adds to the intensity of the story, I think. I've ...

Hey Smilin' =) I thought I'd post my review of all three chapters here. So! This is a greaaat story. John's love for his son, his wife, his brother, is ...

How cool is this =) I agree with what Gracie said entirely. It's surreal and sweet and almost fairytale-like. I reeeally like it! There was a struggle, which enticed me ...

Thank you and thanks for the review! It means alot =)