HibiscusBlush

Hey Priceless =) This is a great start, very interesting! I think your portrayal of Noor, and all your characters, is realistic and I like all of them. The Beauty ...

Bonjour Twin :P First I’ll say, poetry isn't my forte and I don’t have anything bad to say because I found this sorta . . . . . Amazing! I ...

Thanks, livurdestiny! =) This piece is one of my favorites I've ever written. I've thought about extending it, and I might down the road, but I love it as a ...

A Guardian’s Tale . . . Evolet hunched forward in a shallow cave on Mount Ku’Za. The hood of her white cloak masked her eyes. Icy mists of air escaped ...

~Nekole "I love your heels," Alicia said, pointing. I grinned happily, thinking how amazingly easy my choice of fashion was accepted here. Something I can’t always say, unfortunately. Still, I ...

-Wade "So you're telling us you devoured everything in this entire space all by your lonesome?" I questioned, giving him an intense glare and shook my head slightly. "I saw ...

Ebony Souls and Ivory Fangs are both striking and interesting, I really like both. More vote for Ivory Fangs, if we settle with that, I'm fine with it. =)

~Nekole During the tour, my mind was whirling. I know I’ve lived very comfortably all my life, traveling to the most beautiful and breathtaking crevasses of the globe. But, like ...

~Nekole I gave a little squeal of excitement as I ran and leaped onto plush bed, plopping on my back. Sighing deeply, a feeling of dread threatened to overlap my ...

Ebony Souls is . . . dark sounding. Which fits their situtions. I like that one.

(( I'm sorry I'm slow at writing my posts, its been a while since my I roleplayed, just be patience with me... *nervous laugh* )) -Wade I spat a salty ...

Blue fine with meee =) BlueRazors just popped into my head, too, as a suggestion. O' and SubjectBlue I've set up an opening for Paul to encounter the group, Wade ...

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

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Hawaii yeh! :mrgreen: 9.10