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Re: Cranberry
You told me at an early hour yesterday when the cranberry was squashed and snagged in the gap teeth in the middle of your smile and the freckles on your ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Warmth & Wind & the Window
Rambling fan with tan and yellow stains, drop on by when you come my way. Play with my hair like you adore me. I am in the window sill. One ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Airbag
So... I liked it, but it was weird? It was confusing to me, and there are so many analogies and so much symbolism that it's hard to take it all ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Soon
So...I wasn't logged in when I read this a minute or two ago...and I was gonna be lazy and not comment at all. But then I thought about how your ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: I'm Still Here
All around me the world stays the same. They decided my handshake was too short and too weak. And because my shoe-tips were scuffed from tripping over too many side-walks, ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: Mischief Managed: Saying "Until Next Time" To Harry
I guess the Harry Potter books were a part of my childhood, but I wasn't never so fully involved and in love with them as others I know are and ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: The World is Turning Red
Thought I'd try and write a poem centered around a certain color. Please feel free to tell me what you think. Comments and critism are welcomed. : ) The world ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Half-Gone Glass
I really like this poem. Usually I get bored with long poems, but this one I didn't mind it being long. I really liked it... I loved the details and ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Why Didn't I Listen?
So I thought I wasn't going to like this poem (no offense), when I began reading the first stanza. Why didn't I listen? Just wait to hear you out? Because ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Writing Exercises
So I went to for some story generators. I did a lot of the exercises, and they're probably not any good, but I had a lot of fun doing them ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Lemonade
This was so good. Very... different and strange, but I definitely liked the writing style a lot. I actually went to that website and did a lot of those exercises. ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Mirror, Mirror, Off the Wall (Edited)
This is the original version. She told me how many bristles and how many brushes it takes until she can work her hair into something "presentable". And I wonder how ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: This Little Bit Of Sage
Well, I think this poem needs some work. I thought it was very...unique, different. It was interesting because it was different, but at the same time it was kind of ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: The Bird
The bird in my chest Is thrusting Against the ivory Of my rib cage The noise Of its fear Unables my thoughts And I Like the bird Thrust against The ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Sixteen Miles
This is going to be a fail compared to any other post I've done. I really like this.. I'm kind of speechless.
Jul 1, 2011
