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I really liked this-I can really feel what you were feeling when you wrote this. I like most of the rhyming, but in some cases the rythm could be improved ...

Can’t You See? I look at you, You turn your head, You tie your shoe As if I’m dead- If but you knew. Why I look, I can’t explain- The ...

I think this is really amazing. This poem has been stuck in my head ever since I read it-I carved it into my french notebook with a toothpick. I don't ...

Thanks everybody for responding. It's the first love poem I've ever written. I'm probobly going to come out with verson 2.0 tomorrow. Thanks for the advice! :D

:wink: Can’t You See? I look at you, You turn your head, You tie your shoe As if I’m dead- If but you knew. Why I look, I can’t explain- ...