HereBeMonsters

Tuesday, 14th July 2106 Seventeen Days Earlier “But, why?” Amelia Judson despaired; her youngest was very inquisitive, even for a little boy of his age. This conversation, or rather argument, ...

Hi there, I'll get the spelling and punctuation stuff out of the way with first, before I move onto content: As I did I could hear the claws on the ...

I greatly enjoyed reading this story; a very well written version of the old fairy tale, with a few new twists thrown in for good measure. I liked the way ...

Another Way To Die - Disturbed

Hi everybody and thanks for all of your comments. Concerning the matter of it being a bit too jarring, with the characters having little or no explanation or characterisation, there ...

The posting of chapters individually isn't going to work particularly well with this story as they range in length from under two hundred words to over six and a half ...

....O.K.... I've just read this act, along with the previous two, and I have... a few comments to make. First of all, the characters are more than a little one-dimensional, ...

Pure Morning - Placebo

It's an interesting idea, so much so that (with a good few exceptions) its the same as a story I've been planning for a while! I think it'd be worth ...

I thought this was a really great prologue. It set the scene perfectly, beautifully described, you can really feel Aaron's (thought she was a he for a moment) agony as ...

I really enjoy your writing style, you've used some interesting similies- sandpaper on the menu, legs anchored by ball and chain- and you have created some vivid images using very ...

Hi there. Overall, I liked this different twist on the Little Red Riding Hood story. Being a bit pedantic with grammar, there a few little points I want to get ...

What's with Pat Buchanan? I don't even know who Pat Buchanan is, but I felt pulled to the name...... I have a question, what does Pat Buchanan mean? Don't any ...

Ok, here's my thoughts: I don't have a problem with abortion from a moral point of view, and I don't believe it counts as 'murder' exactly, in fact I think ...

I very much enjoyed the open-ended way this story finished with the cliffhanger. Regarding the first reviewer's idea of adding more description of the characters' and setting's appearances, personally