HereBeMonsters

Hey there, I'll deal with the spelling and grammar stuff first. It truly was a beautiful veiw from up here, and I loved it. Needs to be 'ie' instead of ...

Doctor Who Futurama Q.I. All awesome. :smt003

Thanks for the review! :D Just so I know, which bits did you find a bit cliched, so I can change them?

Tuesday, 21st July 2106 Ten Days Earlier The violet-blue lights of the console shimmered across Sep-Nhv’s fleshy beak as he waited. He was expecting many questions from Lyh-Jas, one of ...

With the story I'm currently putting onto YWS, I've started by getting right into the action, however, some of my reviewers have complained that they would have preferred to know ...

Thank you very much, captaindomdude. I'm glad at least one person's reading it! :D

Hi there, welcome to YWS :D I'll get the nitty-gritty out of the way first: As Ryder walked solumly along the road through the alley,... It should be spelt 'solemnly'. ...

Saturday, 18th July 2106 Thirteen Days Earlier Carly awoke to the sound of clanging metal as the rest of the family began preparations to move camp. Turning her head, she ...

Hi, HereBeMonsters here and I'll be your reviewer for today. :D She wasn’t human—no far from it. Did you mean 'She wasn't human- far from it'? It's just that I'm ...

I try to set apart a couple of hours a day to devote to writing. With the novel I'm doing at the moment I'm usually able to write at least ...

Thanks for the review Smylin :D! I get a lot of what you're saying, with the slightly confusing family and bits of the background plot that aren't explained yet. For ...

In no particular order: - The Fifth Element - Alien - Blade Runner - Labyrinth - The Dark Crystal - Casino Royale (2006 version) - Fargo - The Big Lebowski ...

Hi there, Could you please review part two of my novel as no-one seems to be looking at it: Part one is here as well: Thanks :D

Hi again, From what you've added, I can only see a couple of spelling mistakes (At least I presume they're mistakes). She watched from her window as the gates were ...

I thought it was good, but very, very brief. I don't see anything wrong from a grammatical or spelling perspective. It's just very hard to judge this work based on ...