HenPen

I wish upon a star but that doesn't work, I pray to god but he doesn't hear my plea. Can anyone hear me? You need you ears testing, or maybe ...

She walked a path. Paved. With all that is luminary. Pushing her child. A path of broken stars and glowing debris of shattered ships, A You missed out a space ...

Okay so I'm not going to point out all the grammatical errors or anything, because everyone else has done it so it'd be a bit pointless.. I agree I am ...

That was really awesome! :) It flows really well and I didn't want to stop reading! I agree with RoachRedford!; It's be cool to extend it further than that.

I think I might continue this, so it would make more sense and yeah.. So let me know what you think :) I wanted this to be about, how people ...

A couple of spelling errors, but apart from that, it's really good! I really like it, it's very interesting, I particuarly like this bit! I am because of my experiences ...

I do like it, but I agree with Crescent, really reminds me of quite a lot of different songs, but still good! :)

That was so touching, and really means something to me, as that perfectly describes something I know very well. Anyway the words were flawless and perfect, every line was full ...

It's good, nice idea, but you have forgotten some grammar and to use only one "!" without a space after the words. Back to home !!! Back to home! But ...

That was really good! It really describes how it is to feel hopeless and depressed! Yeah, so really good and keep writing, I love it! Walking on an open road ...

I agree with TheBlondie... It was really good, it ended quite suddenly though, not much description of "then end" although that might be a good thing as well I guess, ...

Okay so this was written about a family member, but I didn't use the term "mum" or "dad" or anything, because I want it to be able to be whoever ...

I don't know if it's right or not but I got the feeling you're writing about a pen? And someone enjoying being creative/writing? I thought it was good, but could ...

This was really really amazing, and now I'm addicted to all of your writing! I could see the characters in my mind. And I'm sorry ignored your warning! :P So ...

I thought it was really good, very simplistic and I liked the idea, however, I do think it ended a bit awkwardly and sudden, like you said. So maybe a ...