HelpSOS

Don't forget how the movies AND the books got worse the longer they went on. You wonder if J.K. Just did it for the money.

Sorry some of it is backwards. sorry it's not the best, it messed up. Along The ground it Slithers keeping down low. Watching t It’s head alert to which it ...

I love what you said, so did my friend.

That's not nice, I know your suppose to critique but not be so harsh that the person never wants to come back. You should think before you type. As a ...

thank you

No I didn't edit it before I posted it. Thanks for pointing those out, they are fixed. And my friend is happy you like it. Risa I get confused easily ...

I skipped a couple of unimportant stuff that would make this confusing. My friend and I were bored and so this kinda became a friendly competition. Please enjoy and remember, ...

Loved it, it made me visualize what was happening. REMEMBER PUNCTUATION (inside joke [not really a lot of people know it])

I thought this had no emotion, and didn't flow AT ALL!!!!! to think of this happening you should AT LEAST mention how your friend reacted and maybe even the cat. ...

I posted this because. Um yeah it is a writing peice. I don't care how you see it, it's just something I wrote. :twisted: - HelpSOS p.s. Chain mail always ...

When I was born I was torn And thus taken away. Alone in a kennel Being gentle Every single day. Getting sick Not even giving a lick Not even going ...

Major issues.

Nice job. -Berney

Is this poem suppose to tell me not to ride my bike. And most kids play in neighborhoods, where people can hear them. This poem confuses me. =( :?