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  • Other Poetry Re: Deserted

    What a beautiful poem.. emotional poems always seem to help the reader understand the author's point putting all his thoughts together in one single poem.

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Mask Of Glass

    The poem sounds good.. a little too short but I loved it

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Demon In Disguise

    Excellent! I Love it.. you've chosen the proper words to write this poem.

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Scars: Impending Storm Chapter Three

    Very creative and well written.. excellent story

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Scripts Re: The Adventures of Felix Van Doren

    really cute.

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Forget Me Not

    Thank you both for your comments.

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Beauty

    Wow! you express yourself pretty good in writing poetry.. I wish I knew how.. it takes me a while to put my ideas together and sometimes it causes writer's block. ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Forget Me Not

    Forget Me Not' Forget me not if I shall leave you.. Forget me not if I shall not return. If I shall die, remember that I've always loved you. If ...

    Mar 25, 2011


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