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Re: Did you laugh?
Wonderful poem I liked it! keep writing this is good stuff, you should publish a poetry book of you own.. I've got that in mind too I just need to ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: A Thought
Ok this poem deserves another like, its brilliant I like it alot.. just so you know I dont really check for grammar mistakes.. maybe just the spelling though, but all ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Crying in the rain
I've got no comments towards this poem. everything seems to be ok, no grammar mistakes seen as I read through the stanzas. This is the most sad poem I've read ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Puppet
Excellent! this deserves a ' Like '.. you're right, guys won't tell us how to look, dress, or act. we're free to be ourselves, if they don't like it, they ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Lump in My Throat
This is a wonderful poem. short but wonderful. I see no grammar mistakes anywhere, it's all good. keep writing :)
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Let's Run
Hey there, Kitty's the name I chosed for this site, but Im not willing to mention my real name cuz I don't want any one to know it. not everyone ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: I had you, now I don't
* Dedicated to a special person in my life , whom is now gone.. he's the reason I wrote this poem. Good memories began the first day I met you, ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: I feel like a Bird
Awww cute poem! good work :)
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Not My Daughter
I agree with the rest of them, this poem's beautiful. you shouldn't say you suck at poetry cuz you don't, don't you realize what you just wrote down and all ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Window
Hi there! nice poem you got there. Best poem I've read so far.. its got some rhythym in it.. how did you come with it.. what inspired you to write ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Great Poem! you did a great job coming up with this poem, keep writing poetry and never mind those awful remarks people tell you. they criticize you because their writing ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Rainy Day
All of it looks good but grey is misspelled. its spelled G-R-A-Y
May 29, 2011 -
Re: The Truth about Roses and Violets
I agree, this poem is beautiful. I wish I can write like this, but I always get writers's block. dont you just hate that? lol
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Gone
Beautiful poem. I love poems involving nature.. I'll have to admit it was pretty short, maybe you can add a little bit more to this poem and let me know ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Father
So sad but I liked it. good job writing this poem , its so inspiring to many young people out there besides us.
May 25, 2011