Heidigirl666

I would say there's not a lot to change on this personally, but it could be developed into a longer piece, and make sure your grammar and spelling is checked. ...

'What is it with the lectures on the dangers of stimulants? It's only coffee. You only get addicted to coffee if you're like drinking ten cups a day. Or like ...

My writing is definitely more character than plot too. :wink: I was about to say I don't know if I've ever written something plot orientated, but wait, I have. I ...

I think people are too obsessed with things being 'easy'. Everything these days is to do with convenience, and people wanting to have it all, and you simply can't have ...

My, this has gone off topic. :shock: It went abruptly onto the bible, then gay priests, then onto the differences between pansexuality and bisexuality. As to the discussions on what ...

'For a moment there I thought our gayness was being insulted.'-Blake 'I have to admit, so did I. How do we know it wasn't? Is 'bent', as in gay, a ...

It made me laugh. And I'm assuming that wasn't the reaction you were going for. :wink: It did move on far too fast, and the plot didn't seem to really ...

Nope; I agree, do be sensible. It has absolutely nothing to do with it. I'm almost impressed at how illogical you can be. Seriously. I mean, wow. And rape isn't ...

I agree with 'totally'. Oooh, and 'sort of' and 'kind of'...and I know I write them both a lot, which means a lot of deleting is involved when I'm editing... ...

My sister is always the first to read my drafts, and although usually she only points out typos and grammar mistakes, that's okay, because that's really all I need. I'm ...

*Rolls eyes* 'Ought to have known someone would have started lecturing. Duh, I'm not an idiot. Cocaine equals bad. Well aware of that. I was just young and impressionable and ...

'Cocaine? If someone's mentioning cocaine they have to be worse than us.'-Blake 'Oh God, let's not start talking drugs. How stupid do you have to be to do cocaine?'-Ethan 'Yeah, ...

I've got a tonne; some of them probably are already here, but hopefully some won't be. Male names: Lachlan (a soft 1st 'a', almost 'o', so more like 'lokh-lin' than ...

'Why is everyone speaking in weird languages? Can I join in? Can I speak Hebrew, or even better, Yiddish?'-Ethan 'Babe, don't show off. No one wants to hear you speak ...

Straight, gay, or lying, or confused. This is a reaction I often get when I tell people I'm bisexual. Either I'm 'confused' or I'm kidding myself and I'm really straight, ...