Heidigirl666

I play music all the time while I'm writing. Not only does it drown out any other distracting sounds, but I think it really helps if I play music that's ...

Not always. If I'm really into something, I'll carry my notebook everywhere so I can write whenever the mood strikes me, but I usually manage to retain ideas that pounce ...

Not sure it exactly works like that :shock: , but yes, probably, to write really dark stuff you do at least have to be in touch with your dark side ...

Oh, me too, I'm not great at fight scenes. I think conciseness (that doesn't look like a word, but I'm sure it is) is the way to go though. Fights ...

Yep, agent probably best. Publishing companies are more likely to consider manuscripts sent to them through an agent, as it's already gone through their selection process, and an agent won't ...

It's funny actually, I used to write a lot from a girls POV, but everything I've written in the last few years even has been mostly from a guy's perspective. ...

What on earth for? If you can't be more specific and give details, then people can't help. :wink:

I'll have to admit to not reading all of it :roll: , but I've observed a few things from what I did read. You had some good powerful imagery, and ...

It doesn't say it's terminal... :roll: It says he's responding to treatment.

Are you trying to be funny? :shock: All good points though. I do have a habit of repeating things. :D And I could think of another word. I like saying ...

Nooo!!!! :shock: Dialogue is not the way to go. You'll only end up with a lot of empty dialogue that only adds to the quantity and not the quality. But ...

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Hmmm...I'm not sure I really liked this, but I think probably with some revision it could be quite good. At the moment it just seemed to lack feeling. And don't ...

I liked the beginning, but the ending came across as a little bit rushed. This bit: The young assassin inside was fuming at his adversary’s advance. He knew they would ...

:shock: Um...I'm insane??? :lol: I was trying to explain this to someone the other day, and thankfully for once they didn't look at me like I was crazy. Most people ...