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Re: Timeline
I like the idea of this, and I like what you're trying to say. It's not really a story, it's more like making a point about something using a fictional? ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Submit to the Young Writers Literary Journal! (closed)
It's probably a bit too soon to be asking this, but are we going to find out when the contracts are mailed out? I mean, to us minors. I'm just ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
Hey Azila, I know you don't understand poetry, but this one's pretty straightforward so I was wondering if you'd like to have a look :D
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: A God's Review Providing You Beg
YES! Please, please, please review this poem for mee? Please? Amen. Not sure if that's the begging you were looking for.
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Will Review For [s]Food[/s] HUGS <3 (closed)
Could you review my poem for me? I'd love some more feedback.
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Shatterd
Hey! I'm Stela, and I will be reviewing for you today. First of all, I would suggest that you structure this in a different way. It's just a pargraph right ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Where is God?
A poem inspired by history class, and my own reading. All opinions aimed at improving the poem are appreciated. Where is God? Asked a girl who burned As she tried ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: I'm not hungry, but I'll review for free!
Hey! Could you review my general fiction short story? Thank you!!
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Hey! Could you review my short story? It's general fiction, it's called 'My great in day detail.' Here's the link: Thankss xoxo!
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Story analysis! Prefer poetry, screenwrite,and short stories
Hey! Can you review this for me please?
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: My Great In Day Detail
So I was meant to describe my day in great detail as one of my tumblr 30 day challenge, challenges. Here's what I came up with. Today, I woke up. ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Too Many Secrets
Thanks Mizzle, Aliza and Skins. As soon as Skins pointed out the relation between twilight, I started thinking about my plot and realized it was a lot like twilight. Or ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Too Many Secrets
Guys, honestly, I want it to be ripped apart. I know it's not awesome! I'd prefer longer reviews that tell me what's wrong.
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Too Many Secrets
Far from it ;)
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Hey Kitty! Will you review the first chapter of my novel for me please? Thank you ^^ topic75931.html
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