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Re: Charlie II's WRFF Thread
Hey! Can you review the first chapter of my new Fantasy novel? Thanks a bunch! :)
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: Seed Chapter 1
Hey! I already got help with the first part so I've put it in a spoiler. It's only in case you want to skim over it quickly before you read ...
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: The Diary of Catherine Margaret
Hi :) I will not be analyzing your grammar and nit picking every mistake. I'll leave that to the Grammar Nazis. I thought I would point out though, that something ...
Oct 7, 2011 -
Re: Seed Chapter 1 Part 1
Please rip this apart. Much love, Stela No vampires here. Why was I in the portrait room? It was the coldest, most eerie room in the whole mansion. And it ...
Oct 7, 2011 -
Re: Popularity and Other Insecurities
Hey! I'm Stela, and I'll be reviewing for you today. First off: Soooo Get rid of all the extra o's. It looks unproffesional and messy. Your life doesn’t have to ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: The Final Sleep
Hey! I'm Stela and I'll be reviewing for you today. I really think you have a beautiful, almost poetic piece in the making. However, there are some things that caught ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: VH1'S 100 Greatest (Musical) "Artists" of All Time?
I would just like to mention that SPEAKING LIKE THIS IS OFTEN PERCEIVED AS SCREAMING. If you really want to emphasize something you can instead try and italicize like this. ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Cover for a novel
I can't see it?
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
Hey! Can you please review my short story?
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: carbonCore's reviewRequests
Can you please review my short story? It's general fiction. Thanks :)
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: A breath of fresh air - draft 2
Rip it apart :) A Breath Of Fresh Air Haskovo, Bulgaria, 2007 Boulevard Stefan Stambolov 27: the address of a large, crumbling building, a reminiscent of the Communist era. The ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Hey, can you review my short story for me?
May 9, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
Hey can you review my short story for me?
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Open for reviews!
Hey can you review my short story for me?
May 9, 2011 -
Re: A breath of fresh air
Haskovo, Bulgaria, 2007 Boulevard Stefan Stambolov 27- the address of a large, crumbling building, a reminiscent of the Communist era. The building has twelve floors, sixty apartments. It is filled ...
May 9, 2011
