Hecate

Hello there! I will be reviewing for you today :) First of all, this is a lovely story. It was one of the few stories I read today on this ...

Hello! I would just like to say that this is TOO much like the Vampire Academy. Just, too much. So much in fact, that it could possibly be considered copyright ...

Hey! I'm Stela and I'll be reviewing for you today. [Next , he tried to reach the end of the silver mist that surrounded him[/quote] I believe there should be ...

My name is Stela, and I will be reviewing for you today. Right, nitpicks. provided a better answer to the unexplainable then ( than ) any of the adults around ...

I sincerely hope you give this a shot even though you haven't read the previous chapters. I've included a summary, which should help you get an overall idea of the ...

I sincerely hope you give this a shot even though you haven't read the previous chapters. I've included a summary, which should help you get an overall idea of the ...

Okay, so I reviewed your first chapter, and thought I'd do the second one as well. And oh boy, oh boy isn't there a plot twist? Declan isn't the perfect ...

I have never had a boyfriend for real, and has never done ‘it’ Let's start with the nitpicks, first. My mum has never got me one gift that I could ...

Summary of Chapter 1: In the previous chapter, it becomes obvious that Cordelia is suffering from nightmares about her ancestors, the Cots. They were the first to inhabit this island, ...

That is correct! But because I love ALL types of chocolate. Except white. TUBM is a fan of Truman Capote's writing.

Hello! I'm Stela and I'll be reviewing your work today. First off, WOW this is long. Ever thought of breaking it into chunks as to not intimidate us? :P Secondly, ...

Hey, I'm Stela and I'll be reviweing for you today. here on the dark, writhing ocean Should read 'in the dark, writhing ocean' as opposed to on. “Alice we’ll be ...

Wow! You drew that in grade six? I'm not much of an artist (at all) But I loved this! I love how you used various elements to create a whole...a ...

Hey, I really liked your speech. Here are just some things I thought you could change around a bit. In the cafeterias, according to my mother , pizza+milk= many trips ...

I'm sure there will be others that will be able to give you an extensive review of this (there's always one -.-) pointing out tons of things that could be ...