Hecate

Hey, care to review? Its not too long, actually, as to not intimidate people, but I still didn't get anyone who ripped it apart completely.

Haha! I actually liked it! Some if it didn't make sense to me, but that made it even cuter. It's just so fresh and sweet and I just love it! ...

I have no grammar nitpicks to offer, as I'm not that great with them. Although I haven't read the first chapter, from what I read here, I really like it. ...

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Okay... Freshmen year ----> Freshman year okay . I got lost alot because my school is huge okay. I got lost a lot because my school was huge. Whenever he ...

....WOW! I'm not going to concentrate on technical stuff, don't even ask me to try, I was too enveloped in the actual story. This is...original. Different. New. Okay, I'll tell ...

Awrighty! You have a pretty good piece there, however a few errors! First off, this is how you start off :Welcome Sir, may I help you with anything?” and then ...

Wow, this is really cool! It sounds a bit like some sort of rap, especially the word 'piss'. Also, I like the fact that you brought Greek tragedy into it, ...

Thanks everyone! I liked Snoink's idea, so I'll make sure I develop that a bit more. Yes, I agree it might be a bit of a cliche, but hey, I ...

Haha, no it's not meant to be serious, it's meant to be light and maybe even slightly humorous, but definately not serious. Of course the 'humorous' affect is only achieved ...

* This is written in memory of a leaf that I had to murder viciously by plunging it in boiling ethanol or water, I'm not sure anymore, for the sake ...

*So this is what boredom during french has delivered. Feel free to rip it apart. * Kill me slowly, let me breath, the scent of death, adrenaline rush, kill me ...

Wow that was actually pretty good =) I liked that it had, as you said, two meanings. I liked the idea that something can grown on its own,with no love, ...

I've never been much of a poet, but here's one of my (pitiful) attempts. I got inspired recently. Tell me what you guys think! It's okay, be as harsh as ...

Okay, here we go: She’s been my Bff for life ---> Just thought I'd point out that Bff = Best friend forever, so bff for life would read Best Friend ...