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Awrighty, done with those two :twisted: Ask for more now, and I may be able to get them done right away! 'Cause later I won't be on :P

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested. Already read the last one and the revised one and here's what I think: [quote="blackbird12"]Revised this piece since the critiques seemed to ...

Some nitpicks :D It was the most gorgeous necklace I had ever seen it was a heart shaped “ Connor, the teachers need your help…Sapphire’s disappeared.” - It would work ...

HELLO! *Bumping it up, so people can see it :P* Welcome to Busy Bee Reviews Inc! I want to review your work and it's summer and I have plenty of ...

Hello there! Let's see: It was a scorching day, the sweat rang in beabs down drakes back ---> Drake should be capitalized, and the whole sentence restructured. It was hard ...

he decided to eat them all, because he

Hello there! I used to had have, I think you mean :P family and friends and happy life. But now? I'm lost. Anyway, I have to agree with the people ...

Hello! I'm Stela, and I will be reviewing for you today! As the strands took their time landing on the floor my mom/ mother said through the comb in her ...

Hello! I'm Stela! Welcome to YWS! I should really quit using so many exclamation marks... Anyway, we haven't formally met, but I already gave one of your pieces a critique, ...

Hello! I am Stela, and I will be reviewing for you today! Write because you must A great ability thrust Upon you like a trust That can't be broken I ...

Hello, I am Stela, and I shall be reviewing for you today ;) I loved this, it was very patriotic ;) What I liked about this, is how you started ...

Hello, I would suggest that you post this in separate parts as people are probably intimidated by its length. I will, however, review part of it, because I've seen it ...

Hello! My name is Stela! And I'll be reviewing this for you, today! So, when I read this poem, the first thing I noticed is a bit of a contradiction. ...

Hello! I shall review for you today, because I'm that awesome! Watch as blood drips from every pore Poor bastard doesn’t know what’s in store My extensive education in English ...

I accidentally read the last line first, and was a little prejudiced when I started reading it, because I was thinking Ew, not another Twilight cliche however, that is just ...