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Re: Forget the World~1
Hey there, Tabby! I'm here to review for you as requested! I'll start out with the nitpicks, get them out of the way. Noah walked out his front door, and ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)
Hey Skins! I'm here to review as requested! First, I'll point out some nitpicks and then I'll talk about the story in general. "It’s almost ten o’ clock in the ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: THE Review Thread
FINISHED! GIVE. ME. MORE! Feed this hungry monster with your work!
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Come Together, Vietnam
Hey octo! After the utterly beautiful, detailed review that you have me a couple of days back, it makes me really sad to say that there is no WAY I ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: THE Review Thread
DONE! Gimme more!
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: DELETED!
Hey there! I'm here to review as requested! I shall start off with some nitpicks :) 'I scrunched my nose in disgust, trying my best to block out every possible ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: THE Review Thread
Hello YWSers! I had a thread on here a loooong time ago! Well, now that I'm done with exams, I decided that I need to review. Why? Because if you ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: [Open] octo's got some free time...
hey, would you like to review my prologue of my new novel? It's short, if slightly graphic. Thank you :)
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Needs new shoes.
Hey! I was wondering if you could have a look at my prologue of my new novel! It's General Fiction, it's pretty short. Thanks.
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
Heyy! I was wondering if you could review the prologue of my General Fiction story?
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Did Someone Call for a Reviewer? (Closed)
Hey! I just started working on a new project and this is basically the prologue. I'd love it if you could have a look at it. Thanks!
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: A Corrupted Angel (Working Title) Prologue
*This is just something I started working on.*
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
This is not a proper review, I just wanted to say that I found this hilarious. At first, I thought it was about someone who literally died, then I thought ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Welcome to the Reviewing Machine [OPEN]
Could I please have a review on this poem? Thank you :D
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Did Someone Call for a Reviewer? (Closed)
Hey could your review my poem please? Thanks :D
Jan 5, 2011
