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aw thanks!! i have a fan of ME now and not just my stories!!

stella thomas: im really glad you liked the way i did the lyrics, i thought they fit really well into the story and im really glad to hear that others ...

~*~Lavender Rose~*~ Chapter 2 We stood there, staring each other down. How the hell could I have let that slip by unnoticed? Was I losing my touch? Impossible! Vampires don’t ...

yay sleeping valor found me and is coming to rescue me from the evil grammar and spelling!!!!!! HOORAY!!! thanks :D

thank you so so so so so so so so soooooo much!!! i dont know ANYTHING about grammar. you had me put all those semi-colons in and thats really good ...

alright i liked this a lot. i like the flow although i dont think it is average at all in that aspect. the description could have been more detailed but ...

that is MUCH better!! and please, i should be the one thanking you for the experience.

hehe no thats perfectly fine, if i took the time to go back to every site i had my work up and change all the mistakes on all of them...lets ...

oh my gosh. ok let me get the one bad thing out of the way before i gush. i just think you should go back and put spaces in between ...

Hey!! Since you so graciously reviewed for me, I decided to return the favor!! Here's what I have so far: She smiled to her reflection in the mirror the window ...

hahaha yeeeaaaahhh....those were definitely both typos hehe thanks for catching them. and just in case people didnt pick up on it, Lukas doesnt know the names for these shirts but ...

Lavender Rose Ecstasy. Pure, un-adulterated, ecstasy. The feeling is not comparable to anything. I felt the last pull of life leave my meal and let the body drop to the ...

thank you both for your comments!! sleeping valor: i will definitely look back over the story and maybe lead up to Charlie flipping out! aedomir: thanks for reading this chapter ...

Chapter 5: “A style that Clark Gable would have admired.” (The Postal Service) I filled my mouth with the warm liquid and let it run down my throat. The taste ...

thanks for the comments. my thoughts are that in chapter three i was still giving the reader information concerning vampires and at the same time building their characters more. In ...