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yay! i'm glad you all liked this next chapter. thanks for the spelling corrections, i will fix them soon on my own copy and not on here. as for the ...

~*~Lavander Rose~*~ Chapter 4 I woke up the next evening with a new resolve. I would avoid Crescentia at all costs. Everything was going just fine until she showed up ...

Chapter: 7 “Hold you in my arms, I just wanted to hold” (Muse) I didn't know what to say or how to react to what Nicholas had just said to ...

thanks to both of you and yes, izzeyore, i'll put you on the list as well :D

Hey, This is not the first thing I have read of yours but again, I'm not disappointed in the least. You have this incredible ability to write pieces that are ...

Hey, I agree with Stella's corrections and suggestions. So far, you just have a paragraph that is mostly back information, but at the same time I like the premise of ...

wow, i'm glad i asked because the whole time i thought that it was the man who was the feral and thats why he was killed first but now it ...

HEY!! So, I read this and I liked it a lot. I liked how you were able to show the reader the range of emotions and make them feel them ...

Stella: i definitely know what you mean by saying that it is similar. the thing is that Lukas has no life. he lives for himself and for his pleasures. that ...

~*~Lavender Rose~*~ Chapter 3 I awoke sometime late afternoon the next day. I looked around, confused until I realized I had slept on the couch. I stood up and looked ...

thank you very much for your review. i have another 5 (?) chapters posted on this site so please read more whenever you get a chance. if you do happen ...

yep, Stella you're on it now.

Thank you both for your comments. I have tried my best to make these vampires my own and yes they do have reflections. As you read more, more of the ...

Ch. 6 Nicholas We continued walking down the random street, completely lost in our own trains of thought. Finally he stopped walking and I looked over at him to find ...

thank you sooo much!! and believe me I KNOW i can still use help. i'm not too modest to say that i think i have a good story here or ...