Heatherish

Back again. Something I noticed especially in Chapter 4, was that almost every sentence starts with "He" or "She". After a while it gets redundant. You should see if you ...

Hey! Alright, so I have a few things to say about this part. First and foremost, I am enjoying this story so far. It is very early on but I ...

i know!!! i felt so BAD for Lukas, even though i am the author and the mastermind, it still hurt to see his feelings hurt like that. i still have ...

~(*Lavender Rose~(* Chapter 5 I was at my favorite club again, having been astray for far too long. The sorry replacement in front of me was grinding her backside against ...

Chapter 9: I opened my eyes suddenly and saw the bright light of the morning making shadows on the ceiling. Well, that was different. I had never noticed how many ...

hey, thank you SOOO much for your critique. i'll hold on to your comments and definitely put them to good use when i go back through this story and start ...

alright i definitely will. and yeah, i havent had much time to read your story either, sorry about that. anyway, i saw that you have a bunch of threads on ...

forgettable? well anyway, i'm really glad you liked it and i will put more chapters up soon. i'll send you a PM for this one too?

thank you so much for the review. i will definitely use your critique to change my own copy, although i probably wont change it on here. i am not necessarily ...

hey, thank you so much for that review. honestly, my preface is my least favorite part of the whole book. i get so many suggestions on how to improve it ...

hahaha good i'm glad you like it!

easily, she is still young and doesnt know her own strengths....that will come into play later on :wink:

thanks for agreeing with me on the Twilight thing. I've thought it over and i really and truly cant think of one thing they have in common besides vampires. it ...

thanks i really appreciate how loyal you have become in such a short time. i hope i dont disappoint you :?

he's stubborn and he doesnt want to be responsible for someone especially a werewolf.