Heatherish

i made some of the corrections you guys suggested...thanks for the help, i appreciate it!!!

oh man!!! i have no idea how to do that...i think ill just take your advice and post a chapter per thread...thanks!!!

so this is the first chapter and from now on all the thread titles for this story are going to be called, "MY BOOK" until i come up with something ...

actually i do have a story up...its just called "the preface to my new story" sometime today im putting up the first chaper and i would love to get your ...

so its 10 am where i am and i just finished your whole story (having stayed up all night). you are a FANTASTIC storyteller...your characters are well thought out and ...

hey, im just going to list off what i think could be improved on and give examples if i can remember them. -the way he talks (i think someone else ...

i liked this story a lot. im not going to go over grammatical stuff because people before me have already done that. overall what you have written has a kind ...

billy-i would really like to thank you for all of your comments. however i wanted to ask your opinion on something...you said that i needed more spacing. when i first ...

Preface: That night was my last, although. My last night as a human, anyways. I obviously didn't know it at the time. I had left the party in SoHo at ...

there were a lot of things that i liked and disliked about this. first of all i think you are putting way too many commas, especially in the beginning. i ...

i like the story so far. i agree with the whole jumping three feet in the air thing too. it sounded awkward when i read it. i like the dynamic ...

hey, my name is heather (as if that wasn't obvious)...um I'm 21 years old and i actually have never written anything until i started this book about 2 weeks ago...ill ...