Heatherish

again and again thank you!! i'm really glad that you are understanding my characters and feeling for them. its an authors dream. and you are on the PM list now ...

again, thank you so much for the review!! i love getting new readers! i defended myself against the ridiculous Twilight-cloning accusations. i am not normally one to defend my writing ...

thank for the review!!!! believe me i KNOW that i mess up with tenses in a lot of places. i apologized for that somewhere... anyway, i have a beta that ...

yeah you will get to hunting. when friends of mine read the microwaving-blood part, they were all like "EW". but really, if you think about it, what else would they ...

hahaha, no i'm 20 so i can pretty much read whatever i want. besides that i was reading Anne Rice when i was 14 and that can be quite racy ...

thank you, your review was very flattering, although i am quite a humble person, i think i felt my head inflate a few degrees...

I agree with you that a lot of my dialogue falls a bit flat. A lot of what you are reading is this story in its roughest draft. I am ...

interesting. I've never heard Nicholas been described as "sketchy" before. Actually, I get more complaints that I didn't develop Charlie enough. Again, interesting. I'm not defending my story in any ...

i understand what you mean. first of all, in a few chapters i have Charlie start to "feel" certain things. it may seem like they are falling fast but admitting ...

thank you very much for your review. i agree that giving vampires new qualities keeps it interesting and fun. i know many of the stereotypical vampire characteristics and chose to ...

i'm glad you both liked it. Diana is one of my favorite characters too. I'll put more up soon.

aww thank you so much. as a writer it feels great that others think i captured my characters' emotions well. it means a lot.

I liked this a lot. It is very short but sweet and that works. It makes me think of a persons life and how there are so many tiny little ...

I don't think that the dialog is that bad at all. The characters are not too perfect or flat but could be slightly more developed. ALSO, I think you could ...

Oh my gosh. That was amazing! I agree with the first comment that you should keep the man nameless. You may have meant it this way, but the whole time ...