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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: THe Hunter is Hunted

    You spelled pointed wrong, and you need to use a semicolon instead of a comma: "You're going to have to do a better job, I've had a gun pionted at ...

    Sep 6, 2009
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Virus - 1

    While I was reading this I noticed you're having a little trouble using your punctuation correctly. For example: when you use semicolons, you use them like a comma. That day ...

    Sep 6, 2009


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