HeadInTheClouds

Er.......I got three, is that bad? :oops: Only the 'is you book the first in a planned trilogy' (what's wrong with trilogies?), the one about having an unclear prologue (what's ...

Chris Wooding - By far my favourite. I love his style, and his plots are totally original. My two favourite books by him are called The Haunting of Alaizabel Cray ...

Just did a bit of editing. I have no idea why my computer didn't pick up on that spelling mistake. *shakes head* I swear, it hates me. I'll do a ...

Two days ago I put the prologue to The Chronicles of Oblivion up on the site in fantasy fiction. I would have posted about it sooner, but my internet doesn't ...

DANG! That makes the prologue I just wrote seem like a five year old wrote it. It was amazing. I kept trying to find mistakes, but all I can say ...

The Chronicles of Oblivion - Prologue The cold, windless night was eerily quiet. Even in the barren, lifeless desert there was less sound than was natural. The only source of ...

7/10 I'm not very religious, but I like it. And to the last person to review my sig. it's a spinoff of visualize world peace. World peace, whirled peas, get ...

7/10 Not halarious, but funny. P.S. I keep changing my sig., so all ratings of my sig. before this are irrelevant.

8.5/10 It's quite beautiful. I love the combination of the colours in the clouds.

I'd use it, when and if my phone is charged. I'm always forgetting to charge it so it's hardly ever on, but yeah, i'd totally use it.

I have to disagree fishr, at least from my personal experience. My family has never been able to keep our goldfish alive for more than a few months. Maybe we're ...

I didn't really get it, but I thought it was quite beautiful. It flowed very well, and I loved the repitition of the first part.

Welcome to YWS Hope. I like writing poetry and fantasy as well. I'd love to see some of the stuff you've written here on the site.

The stuff you're writing sounds really interesting. I'd love to hear more about them.

Chapters usually end with either some sort of line that lets you know the chapter is done, or something shoking that makes you want to read what happens next.