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Re: Robotic
Wow. This is very cool . . . and creepy. o.o The lack of punctuation is powerful and definitely captures the "robotic" feeling, but it's a little hard to read ...
Dec 4, 2009 -
Re: FB Book 1 Ch 1 Part A
Hai. :) Still no reviews, huh? I've never watched Fruits Basket (I've heard of it though), so I'm not sure how qualified I am to review this, but I didn't ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: 2012 End of the world?
The world could possibly end in 2012, like Hippie said, but the predictions would be just a coincidence. Like the above commenters said, the end of the world has been ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Prime Death
Hi there! I love animal stories, and this was sweet and sad. The main thing is is that you have a lot of grammar mistakes. Here's an overview (the red ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Kissed pt.7
Hi! You really need to post more at time, so people have more to review. Angry, something else she could feel. Without a heart, would she be able to feel ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Snarl
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: Memoirs of Ali - Chapter 4
Memoirs of Ali Chapter Four Days passed and turned into weeks. I took up residence quite near Toby's clump of flowers, hidden between the logs of a pile of wood. ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: The User Below You ... [2]
o.o How could you suggest that. TUBM is six feet tall.
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Werewolf
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
*pokes* I've never used one of these little threads. Let's see if it works . . . I just need a review on this one chapter. ^^
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: This Week on YWS: 11/21/2009
I third Aquamarine. And I fourth her. :D
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Dark
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Kissed pt.5
It's me again! She went in a fury, This should be "into." She crumpled up her invisibility cloak, grew out her fangs and claws, which she had been filing down ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Kissed pt.4
Hey! No reviews, huh? Well, I'm here to fix that. ^^ This is a very interesting concept you have here. I've always loved animal stories, and so I think the ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Stolen Hearts.
Hello there! So, this poem is sweet, but there are a few things: The Heart Starts Of Love. You need a "with" instead of "of" here. It To Be Stolen ...
Nov 26, 2009
