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Hi! I'm Hawkie and I'll be your reviewer today. I love Warriors. :) Kittypets weren't respected by the Clans. Anyone who's read the books knows this already, so it's not ...

Awwww, this is so sweet. A lot of "complicated grown-up stuff" has happened in my family lately so it hits close to home. He has bright red hair, and I’ve ...

I joined YWS this year and it's been awesome. :) I've met a lot of interesting people and read many memorable works. I've also received some very helpful reviews that ...

Memoirs of Ali Chapter Six That night I was unsure if I was dreading the dawn or looking forward to it. My emotions seemed to have become rather blurry. As ...

Me me me me! Preferred Name to use: Caitlin Favourite Colours: Black, blue, pink Interests: Wolves, birds of prey, music, singing, writing Favorite books/films: Watership Down, Harry Potter, Disney-Pi

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Memoirs of Ali Chapter 5 * * * * * * * "My, my, my. What a sad thing this is." The voice that stirred me out of unconsciousness sounded ...

Hi there! I liked the next installment of your story. At the end of the school day, Julie spotted Anthony. "Uh, sorry about this morning. Didn't mean to interrupt your ...

Yes . . . you. *cackles* TUBM has had a snowball fight this winter.

Speaking is choking for you, Your lips trip over words caught in your throat, Their edges cut as you spit them out And let them drop You stand, your eyes ...

Hawkie here! The money-heart is awesome! However, the background seems kind of dull to me, since it's just gray and white. Perhaps there's a way you could spruce it up. ...

Hi there! I'm Hawkie and I'll be your reviewer today. The red letters are the things I've corrected, and the bold letters are my comments. Elise stood before the full-length ...

Hi! I like your poem - but it's very short! I think you could expand on it a little more. The hatchling leaps This is my favorite line. However, young ...

Hello! I'm Hawkie and I'll be your reviewer today. You have a very interesting concept here, and your characters seem interesting as well. However, your writing leaves a lot of ...