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Re: At what age did you start writing and
I probably wrote my first when I was about seven. "The Robin and the Bluebird," about a robin and a bluebird (no kidding) who married and laid an egg, which ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Scarf
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: The Road to Exodus
Hello! And welcome to YWS! Silence clung to each living entity in the room, as the still figures of two men devoured the soft ring of light illuminated by the ...
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: Fight scene help
Another good way to capture emotion is a lot of glorious bloody description of the battle itself. Just don't go overboard. Enough to keep the audience tense and a bit ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Cliche Ending
Hey! Nice song! I imagine it as a passionate country song, am I right? It's hard to review lyrics, because you don't know the tune and how the song would ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [4]
Banned for being sensitive at bad jokes toward boys.
Jun 17, 2009 -
Re: Azula - Story of a Princess (Part 2)
What you've all been waiting for! Part 3 coming soon (hopefully). :roll: *********************************************** The sun set and rose and set again, and Azula's obsession over her discovery d
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: [Deleted]
Hi there! You said you wanted reviews so here I am! Her hair was wavy, long and silvery blonde, and her eyes, wide and almond shaped, were an emerald green. ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: What's your writing process?
I'm an experimenter. I'll write about three pages of one story, take what I like out of it and leave the rest. My computer is cluttered to the brim with ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Just who is "Hawkie" anyway?
Hi Foxfire; yes, I am homeschooled, and proud of it! =D I like writing Fantasy and Drama stories. What do you like to write?
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Random Randomness!!!!!!!
Oh gosh, this is so funny and random! And utterly stupid. XD You could have erevised it so that it had a little more structure or an iambic pattern, but ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Repeating
Hey, I like this little piece. It has a nice poetic feeling to it. However right now, I would rather be texting you then have to face you. You need ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Just who is "Hawkie" anyway?
Hawkie is a 13-year-old girl who likes talking about herself in third person! =D You wanna find out more? Okay, read on. I'm quiet, thoughtful, and a general introvert who ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Curly. Just call me Curly. I love to be friends to anyone!
Hi, Curly! Nice to meet you!
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Dinosaurs
Jun 5, 2009
