Hawkie

Is that you? You're really pretty. But I do prefer avatars that show something other than just the person. 6/10 Like my new one?

xD Classic, Dems! 9/10.

Really funny. A bit repetitive though. 7/10

Banned for trying to start that game.

Completely and absolutely. :D TPBM writes morbid poetry.

Banned because you banned me earlier.

Ooh, I really like this. Not much to say about it. When a voilent wave, Should be "violent." Until, This "until" doesn't serve much of a purpose. Maybe cut it ...

No way! My poor delicate ears . . . TPBM likes cake.

Banned for living in Nowhere Land.

Banned for having a hilariously adorable avatar.

Their love was all a put-on. We didn't need their lilies and red lips, passion and kisses and words, vows that slowly splinter, give out, fade away, murmured in the ...

6/10 It sounds interesting, it's creative, but there's no hint of a conflict anywhere. "Night had fallen upon the forest, but there was no rest to be found there."

Hi again! You asked for a review, so a review you get. :D Overall This is a really sweet story, I can feel the tenderness behind it. :) Nice work. ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I'm Hawkie, and I'll be glad to help you out if you're a bit confused, so feel free to PM me. For a reminder, though, it's ...

This is a really sweet little piece. I see nothing wrong with the plot or characters at large, so I'm just going to be picky and point out a few ...