Hawkie

I think that women, by nature, are more inclined to write than most men (do correct me if I'm wrong). Teenage girls especially feel the need to capture their more ...

You want more, you get more! :D This is a lot more light-hearted than the last one. Enjoy! *********************************************** “I can't do this,” Aang groaned, collapsing onto the couc

Oooo! Excitement! And more critiques! Yay! ^^ Expect them reasonably soon. ^^ I'm looking over what you changed, and it all looks very good. I like the new "Diary" format ...

Smoothies

. . . spontaneously vomited blue ducks who just happened to know the secret of . . .

Banned for liking Star Trek. (Although there's nothing wrong with that!) :D

Hello! I'm Hawkie, and I'll be reviewing you today. ^^ So, without further ado: The cool, smooth fabric slipped through my busy fingers as I fumbled through the line of ...

Oh, Sophia! How beautiful! This was very well written; I found very few mistakes, and I think the above review covers most of them. However . . . She could ...

Banned for LOLing.

Thank you all!! Especially June and Sophia! Such great reviews - you flatter me very much. ^^

Banned for being nocturnal when I am too.

Hi there. ^^ I'm Hawkie and I'll be your reviewer today. I. Nit-picks "Aimee! "We're going to be late!" Why the two quotation marks? I decided to get in the ...

sap

bricks (don't ask)

Wow, Nixon. This is a really odd poem. I'm not sure quite what to say. Forgive me for asking, but what's it about? I don't understand it. It's definitely intriguing, ...