Hawkie

Wow, this is very impressive! I'll second the above review on that one stanza, though. It feels out of the flow of the rest of the poem. Also: Fading from ...

Hi, Lawson! :-D I'm Hawkie and I'll be reviewing you today. I. Nit-picks Left foot. Right foot. Left foot. He kept running. As his leg pushed through the air, his ...

Banned for having more posts than me.

You get a can of mayonaise. -insert coin-

Well, this is a Zelda fanfic. Wind Waker, to be exact. Wind Waker is my favorite game in the whole world (gotta love the art style,) and I always kind ...

:O You get the Ocarina of Time! Lucky you! -insert coin-

Awwww, how nice! *hugs stuffed toy* You get a box of your favorite kind of candy. -insert coin-

You get a can of Silly String. -insert coin-

Hello, Youngwriter, and welcome to YWS! I'm Hawkie, and I see that everyone else has beaten me to explaining the rules, so I'll just say hi. :-) Feel free to ...

Hi, Insanaca! Welcome to YWS! I'm Hawkie, and I'll be reviewing you today. Coz' everytime I think It's you This part doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Is ...

I don't picture my characters like real people, but I don't really think of then as anime/cartoons either - I suppose it's kind of a mixture, like an impressionistic painting. ...

You get an elf. -insert coin-

Hi there! It's Hawkie and I'll be reviewing you today. This is a cool poem; it's really sweet. My one complaint is that it seems a bit run-on; there's no ...

Hi Dance, I'm kinda new so I don't really know you, but welcome back anyway. :-)

I am: very expressed introvert slightly expressed sensing personality (eighty-nine percent!) slightly expressed thinking personality slightly expressed judging personality Although I took another test