Hawkie

Wolfieeeeee! So happy to see this up, finally! Good Wolfie! *pats* So. Your review. i. Nit-picks Lyra didn’t know where she was, but it looked like a castle. Someone was ...

Hi, it's Hawkie. I'll be your reviewer today. Okay . . . this piece. I'm sorry to say I didn't care for it much, the way it is now. It ...

Central

Hey, it's Hawkie, and I'll be your reviewer today. First of all, welcome to YWS! Second of all, your review. He was a sweet young boy Just turned seven Killed ...

Stone

. . . turned into a cookie superhero. However, her biggest rival, the Cake Man, decided . . .

Hi, Hawkie here. Like the above review says, this is too short and unclear. It's okay for short stories, especially short stories of this caliber, to have much less backstory ...

. . . managed to slay one and eat it, but it tasted just like . . .

Hi, welcome to YWS! I'm honored to be your first reviewer. You have some cool ideas here. I like stories about animals, they make me feel happy inside. The way ...

Hi! ^^ Nice song. I'm Hawkie and I'll be reviewing it for you! ^^ First of all: the title. You need to know that "breath" is a noun. "Breathe" is ...

8//10 Nice. I definitely want to know what these people are doing. "Do you want to come with me and see the dragons this afternoon?"

Cat

Alexis: I'd get up and change the dang thing, of course. Then get some batteries for the remote while I'm up. I'm not lazy like *some people.* Rapha: *glare* Conrad ...

Hi! I liked your song; it's pretty cool! ^^ A few things, however: Every day in the street there is a fuss, For some reason I don't like the word ...

Hey, this is pretty cool. Short and to the point. One thing I don't get is the "waterless" in the fourth line. I like how you ease gradually from sea ...