Hawkie

Whoa. That was . . . pretty intense. And your concept is interesting! "Papillion" is an original name for a planet, especially since it means "butterfly," but you've got me ...

Memoirs of Ali Chapter Three . . . (hey, that rhymes) Just to clear things up: Yes, Ali is a boy. ^^ * * * * * Violet was the ...

Child

Hello! Psst, don't tell, but normally I don't review poetry. I think I can handle this, though. Soaring, gliding, floating Twirling, rotating, whirling Fleeting, rushing, speeding In a recent poem ...

Demeter - for being, if I'm not mistaken, the first person I met on YWS and helping me out a lot when I was a newb. ^^ Oh, and also ...

Trinket

Cheerful, sarcastic, quiet, a little weird, and introverted.

:( That was so sad, Aqua. And beautiful. I don't really have a whole lot to say. You wouldn’t kill it, you told me that it looked to intelligent. I ...

Substance

Hi there! I thought your story was interesting, but it didn't get me excited or enthralled like some stories do. You have a lot of grammar mistakes throughout. I don't ...

Oh, but there was one thing, but it has nothing to do with any mistake of yours: Ali is a boy?! I thought he was a girl! I think of ...

Memoirs of Ali Chapter 2 It was an overcast day and I was hunting, concealed in the twigs of one of the bushes near the tree roots. I heard a ...

Thorn! Hai there. ^^ So, this was really cool. A good read. Unlike Jabs, I like short, snappy stories without too much meat. xD Very long ago, in a faraway ...

o.o Whoa! That's beautiful! The first one is my favorite. It's got so much character, and the sky is amazing. I'm not sure about the cars and the strip of ...

Heeyyy there! I'm Hawkie and I'll be your reviewer today! So, guess what? Wolves are my favorite animal, so I was kind of biased to like this piece, but oh ...