HausOfDay

I am quite unhappy to say that I relate to this. I love the theme of the poem, and I think that you should certainly write more of the like. ...

Ach! Again! Do it again, put more pressure on me darling. Skin me Softly, like the fox on the hook hang me, limp as a rose I want you to ...

Sad poem, but quite beautiful :) I made a connection between the bird and the wire, as though this is it's 'life line', like a wire to someones heart. This ...

I've never reviewed before, I think I'm going to be quite terrible, but I'll give it a shot. I really enjoy the second and third stanza, 'the silence rings', I ...

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Mother, I have gone mad. I have split myself into two; two black slabs of a person. One sits in his wretched cave, screaming silently at the wall - the ...