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Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 50
Yes, yes it is.
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: moby celeste
Of course, that makes much more sense. I envisioned space at first because 'celeste' brings to mind celestial objects (i.e. moons, suns, stars, etc.) unless those aren't celestial and I'm ...
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 50
Good God , I should start reading from the beginning and try to catch up... Be right back :P
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: Timeblinks (part one)
Thank you fellow Blue's Clues member! :P I didn't notice any parts that missed dialogue being separated but I'll look over it again.
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Timeblinks (part one)
Thanks. I told my brain what you said about him... He isn't very happy. Oh yeah, he just threw a chair. I should go stop him...
Feb 17, 2015 -
Re: Timeblinks (part one)
I sent a reply, it didn't send. Now I forgot what I said... :P Alright let's try this. Run-on sentences? Didn't notice any but then again I have trouble proofreading ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Timeblinks (part one)
So much words... Agh! xD Thanks for the review, though I'm surprised I made it through. For starters, I have trouble describing settings because I know exactly where my characters ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: -Removed-
Wow, didn't even notice it until you mentioned it xD
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friends
Thanks (starting a lot of replies with 'thanks'...) Yeah that was a lot of lucky's but he is crazy so... :P I didn't want to focus on the setting so ...
Feb 11, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friends
Thanks! I wrote this a while ago so I'm not quite sure what I was referencing in some parts. Here however: It%u2019s a horrible thing when imagination ends, when people ...
Feb 11, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friends
Thanks! I wrote this a while ago so I'm not quite sure what I was referencing in some parts. Here however: It%u2019s a horrible thing when imagination ends, when people ...
Feb 11, 2015 -
Re: Humphrey
I'm glad you liked it. It was meant to be a humorous story, I didn't expect anyone to take it so seriously :P About the water part, I'll edit that ...
Feb 7, 2015 -
Re: True beauty
Well, you know you can edit it, right? Just fix it :P
Feb 6, 2015 -
Re: Humphrey
Thanks! Yeah, I think I'll edit it a bit. I envisioned the waiter as a human and forgot to imply whether or not he was, but now I'm thinking of ...
Feb 5, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friends
Okay, I don't know if you read my reply to the review below, but I explained that the narrator is a man who went crazy thinking he was the imaginary ...
Feb 5, 2015
