HarpoMarx

EXCELLENT WORK!!!!! very good. I think this is very good. Although I did notice that you wrote "Mean on the sidelines" I think it should have been "Men on the ...

good work. I really liked it. But i could see a few spelling mistakes. Also, grammatical errors, just watch for some bits you have put, "you'r" Just be sure to ...

another thing that confused was the changing of characters early in the piece before the carriage scene. I don't quite understand that, it confused me who was who. But good ...

It's excellent. Though some bits confuse me, I thought it was good. I was just a bit confused on some of the things that you put in there. Like: I ...

This is basically a script that i wrote when i was 9/10/11/12 and I need feedback on it.

It's agin good. But i was lost at the beggining as to who was telling the story. I was unclear at the beggining when: Maria hobbled from her straw bed, ...

Hey, I thought it was really good. I think that it's overall a good piece. Although i thought that you could improve in some sections, i think that what you ...