HarpoMarx

This is good and powerful. I thing it's good.

Good, excellent. Although watch punctuation such as: “Arms dragged me out of the doors...people pulled me away, shouting. The police were there, the ambulance...I was taken over to an they ...

I love it. It's short, it's sweet and very effective description. I can imagine the setting clearly. Well done.

lovely. This is very pretty. I love it so much. Be careful with capitals though. But i thought it was wonderful. It's worth a lot of praise.

beautiful piece of poetry here. It's lovely. Keep going!

good. Just watch some punctuation. But over all I thought it was good. And don't be to hard on yourself (silly thing for me to say seeing as I push ...

I like it. I don't really like fantasy...I don't know why just don't. But this was good.

The point of Tybalt's rapier was mere inches from Romeo's chest. Though I knew it was a vision of ghosts I could not stand and watch my love die by ...

It was a gloriously sunny day. Bright rays of sun shone from the heavens, illuminating the sky and the Earth. lowercase Bright green tree’s sparkled in the sun and stood ...

Um.... Yeah Its great! Though i feel a bit weird cos now everyone seems to "know" what "love" is and I feel like i don't. GREAT WORK!

Very goood! This is excellent! one concern: gathered at our newly build kingdom Shouldn't it be 'Built" But its good very interesting: Maybe extend on some bit but its excellent!

Great work! Just a couple of grammar mistakes here and there as others have suggested. But keep up the good work

Its a good start, but it needs so much more description. "Listen Daniel as long as I am not around, Araina will be safe.” “Acayla , what are you saying?” ...

Okay its an excellent piece of writing. But I am a bit confused about who is who... What one is Miles- is he the reporter or is he the one ...

Good work Buddy. I thought it was a very dramatic ending and I think you could keep working on it I am very interested to see what happens next. Keep ...