Harley

I think your story was really good but you seem to use a lot of complex words which you have to read twice in order to understand them. I like ...

Please don't think that I am being morbid but I am writing about what I think death is like... You close your eyes and drift away... unable to see, speak ...

trying means hard it was meant to be that way. Thanx 4 da critz-keep em coming!!!!!!!

I haven't finished it yet but I posted it on AOL and got loads of criticism from people who thought it was a poem and someone said i was living ...

i have asthma... This was totally good because i love songs which sorta dont tell a story

The way you say words became rigid made my mind go funny... sort of like rachels. the only thing is you say "No more pills! It says." and this doesn't ...

This is really good but it definitely needs some work. Try fixing the typos and it should be a lot better, and make sure you keep th present tense all ...

that was really great but I think you have 2 make it a weensy bit clearer that they aren't actual brothers

A Life Unwritten Started by Emma Finished by Harley (with permission by Emma) My name’s Anna, I normally hang around with my two best mates – Janet and Suzie. I ...