Harley

I remember the first time I saw her. She'd just moved in- a vision in baggy jeans and black nail polish, which glinted in the hot July sun. Her father, ...

hmm... this would get a lot of people arrested, but, meh the HOTT dude i like (no names :wink:) johnny depp brad (as crysi says, damn fine) jack ( :wink: ...

It didn't really blow my mind, but it was okay. Not really personal though.

Emma, Scottish slang is really hard for other people to understand, because, frankly, it's hard to see the origins. I mean, how the hell did we get the word "greet" ...

It's really awesome, but it could use some grammar. im not worthy enough for you, and this place. i should just leave, find somewhere that wants me, but where??? I ...

I agree, it's a good poem, but it isn't as good as a song.

It's really cool- amazing lyrics, and really different to what's on mtv these days

Something not working for my life I think this wou;d be better as "sxomething's not working in my life"; to me personally it reads better.

It's nice, the lyrics are cool and i'm sure you'll have a rockin tune.

Yeah, it's okay. Doesn't seem very personal though.

It's pretty cool- i can't wait til you guys get some songs up online.

I agree with Chevy =D>

It's cool, but i agree with ohhewwo- needs a bridge. Whats your site address; i'd love to check it out?

I agree with Inertia; when you see the words "lonely path" and "walk alone" together, you immediately think of Boulevard. And what's with all the underlined verses?

It seems more like a poem than a song, to me, but it's very well written.