Hao_Nguyen

I liked it ^_^ But it kinda sounded simple. You could add some examples in there. Maybe more on the man's life and why he didn't have any of those ...

I made the changes. Thank you so much people. ^_^ Please continue to review it so I can continue to perfect it.

Thank you alot for reviewing it and I will be on it to fix it. ^_^ It's just I kinda only took like 10-15 minutes to quickly write it and ...

What Happened by Hao Nguyen I look out the window and what do I see? I see the tall, towering trees. I see the dew-soaking grass. I hear the orchestra ...

Sorry, and yeah, I usually only write my stories in the time frames of either 10 minutes to 20 minutes.

Ok I know that it is long, but I don't expect a review from it. Don't correct any mistakes because I understand that it is long and it would take ...

The concept is alright, but it is kind of confusing to me at least. You could describe the couple selkies more and the two characters more so I can imagine ...

The idea is good and all, but it isn't written in a story format. It just seems like someone's schedule and their remarks. Also you could add a little more ...

Ok this story has bad formatting I know but bear with me, just open your mind and think about my concept and image that I'm portraying before you. Memories A ...

Honestly it sounds like the movie, "One Missed Call" where a ghost sends messages out to people, telling them that they only have a little time until they die. The ...

The concept isn't bad at all, and with the idea with the blood capsules is very clever of you. However, like many would think, it is kinda random, and if ...

Hey. You guys have no idea how excited I am to see other young writers. I feel like I am going to enjoy this place. Well, to begin with, my ...