Hammerofbaal

Glory and praises to you! Absolutely awesome. I can't say a bad thing about this beyond a few typos. I love your writing style and your characters. Somebody said that ...

If Terry is a con man, I'm going to need more details. More descriptions. The difference between a good con and a bad con is always in the details. He ...

Great job and kudos galore. I could have done with a little more description about the town around the Clock Tower. It would have made the town's disappearance that much ...

You've got a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but nothing that a quick edit wouldn't have fixed. My biggest problem with your story is that I want to know what ...

It's been said many times and many ways by numerous people here, but I think this bares repeating. Your opening was brilliant. It had my attention instantly. I also like ...

This is a rather short depressing story. The sister is a cutter, the mother is "dead" to the world, and the main character thinks himself sane and rational, yet seems ...

This sounds almost like something I'd read from one of my 40K novels. It's dark, it's grim, and it doesn't give you all the information you want right until the ...

I enjoyed the story. It's short, quick, and to the point. I think you could go a little further into detail when you're describing things. Maybe the serpent lady's scales ...