Hammerofbaal

Glory and praises to you! Absolutely awesome. I can't say a bad thing about this beyond a few typos. I love your writing style and your characters. Somebody said that ...

If Terry is a con man, I'm going to need more details. More descriptions. The difference between a good con and a bad con is always in the details. He ...

Great job and kudos galore. I could have done with a little more description about the town around the Clock Tower. It would have made the town's disappearance that much ...

I don't know why this com to mind, but I feel compelled to tell you now. He hasn't crossed my mind in years. I don't particularly like to think about ...

You've got a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but nothing that a quick edit wouldn't have fixed. My biggest problem with your story is that I want to know what ...

There was a man up at the podium. He was yelling about something. I didn't understand what. It's not that he was speaking some other language, not that at all. ...

It's been said many times and many ways by numerous people here, but I think this bares repeating. Your opening was brilliant. It had my attention instantly. I also like ...

This is a rather short depressing story. The sister is a cutter, the mother is "dead" to the world, and the main character thinks himself sane and rational, yet seems ...

This sounds almost like something I'd read from one of my 40K novels. It's dark, it's grim, and it doesn't give you all the information you want right until the ...

Marvelous. There really isn't a negative thing I can say about this story. The flow of his consciousness is seemless. Your descriptions are spot on. I could almost feel the ...

To clarify, she was actually there at the rest stop. I can see how the wording and story can make it slightly confusing, so I'll work on it. My apologies ...

The world is ending. It didn't come with fire and brimstone like the Bible suggested; nor was it cold like Ragnarok. The scientist big-wigs say that the Earth's core is ...

I enjoyed the story. It's short, quick, and to the point. I think you could go a little further into detail when you're describing things. Maybe the serpent lady's scales ...