Halycon

This is a kind first for me, writing a more experimental, symbolism driven poem. you can tear it apart if you like, but what would be really helpful is feedback ...

This poem was really good but I felt you left it hanging slightly. maybe just write write one more line of some sort or swap the last two lines around. ...

This is an awesome poem. It flows really well which is something I struggle with and the images you use just fit together really well. no critiques. just awesome. Keep ...

Thank you all for your feedback. It is much apprieciated and I have slightly altered the poem in accordance with it.

I actually quite enjoyed reading this poem. the rhyming scheme seemed a little annoying at frst but the fact you don't use it on every line and the lines have ...

This poem isn't bad, but it could be improved I watch the tiny people Smaller then ant people I want cut out the "people in the second line of this, ...

Needs some work on the flow I think. . Dead Season ~ Evening air pulses around me Lost amongst the corrugated furrows Of hunchbacked feilds, rolling, Petrified mid-flow ~ The ...

I quite enjoyed this poem. it is simple yet powerful "sings of victory" I think this should be "signs of victory" But apart from that I can't realy see much ...

This poem is by no means bad but you could have done it better. for a start you re-use the word sun too much within the poem, try and think ...

Would you mind reviewing this poem? I haven't got much feedback.

I liked your poem overall but there a few things that you could do better The chaos that's yet to come Will leave it's mark in the sky. These two ...

Needs some work helping it flow I think.... ~ Unfamiliar ceilings ~ We sit on a splintered, sandy mosaic as the unfamiliar ceilings of foreign skies stretch above us Boundless, ...

Well aside from qriting I'm a HUGE music fan. as for movies, just as long as its funny, I'm happy xD

Thanks for making me feel welcome =) as for the questions. Yes, I LOVE snow. I've had lots of it recently. I have never written a full novel but I ...

I've posted few little stories and poems but I haven't really intoduced myself in here yet, so yeh, Hello xD