Halycon

Experimental poem and I haven't written a poem in ages, so please review and tell me how to improve in writing this style of poem. Old Ink Stale urine and ...

Top 5 (in no particular order) 1. Dune by Frank Herbert- just finished this last week and I absolutley loved it. The first 30 pages or so were a bit ...

I assume this is about long distance running eh? in that case I can relate to this as I used to do cross country runnning and I know exactly the ...

Review please :) Its quite long and probably awful as I haven't written a full poem in pretty much half a year xD Thanks

Hey, I enjoyed this poem, It was really nice, short sweet and simple. if I were you I would try and spice it up a bit using some more adjectives ...

Haven't written anything in a while so this is kind of a return for me and its pretty much a splish-splash of emotion so don't be afraid to tear it ...

Helloo Thinking of entering a competition with this poem, but no-one has reviewed it yet. Thank you :)

Haven't been on here in ages. An old poem of poem edited slightly for a competition, Just need to get some feedback, what could be done better etc. Peeling Dreams ...

Haven't written anything for a few months so its probably awful. But thats where you come in right? :) Unbalanced ~ Chemistry in springtime, slatted sunlight steaming through the classroom ...

Please could you review my poem, I need some feedback. thank you

I know it's a bit rough around the edges, so any help would be appreiciated ~ Peeling Dreams ~ Lazy summer haze infects the pathways and alleys of this town ...

Pretty good in general :D few little things Into a corpse of decay this line sounds slightly off in terms of flow compared to the last stanza I would change ...

Hey this poem is alright but it could be made better "When I was a child I planted dreams in a yard as pretty," Those things less common in the ...

Small Treasons ~ You say Your small treasons bother me too much But look from an acute angle See them, tiny follicles of sand ticking one by one Into my ...

Hello, please could you review my poem, it kinda an experiment for me so I would like some feedback on how to improve Thanks