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Re: Mulling Over Wine: A Toast
Maybe I'm wrong, but I think all three of them are on crack. Don't change a thing.
Nov 23, 2005 -
Re: Bound for Glory: Part two (Title change in works)
Just a thought, and maybe it's just me, but if this were my story, I would think about rearranging the order of chapters. This is what I would do: I ...
Nov 17, 2005 -
Re: Monsters (Part 1)
I can't stay mad at you. Because your my friend and only trying to help.
Nov 17, 2005 -
Re: "Wildy Waving", or "Forgotten"
A great poem as always. The feeling of not wanting to let go of a love that you shared with someone really comes through.
Nov 16, 2005 -
Re: Monsters (Part 2)
My heart raced and I knew I would see the end soon. I turned over and awaited the merciless teeth of a ravenous monster. To my surprise and immense relief, ...
Nov 16, 2005 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You.
8/10 as a Catholic (non-practicing, but Catholic none the less) I find you signature very funny.
Nov 15, 2005 -
Re: Monsters (Part 1)
I really don’t know what I was thinking being out that late, especially walking through the woods, the heart of the woods, where the trees are so thick that you ...
Nov 15, 2005 -
Re: Run
"You think you could escape! No one escapes. Not from me." The voice echoed down the ally. "Run all you want, as soon as I finish with this one, I'm ...
Nov 13, 2005 -
Re: Bound for Glory: Part two (Title change in works)
Just so you know, the story doesn't have to be about the revolutionary war. Even if you are calling the enemy solders "Lobster-backs". This story can take place in a ...
Nov 13, 2005 -
Re: Writing Challenge 11/7
Well they've got Snoink, I always suspected her... Or him rather. Anyway, Sureal needs to keep in mind that the $10,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 bail is American money. Where are you going to ...
Nov 11, 2005 -
Re: Cid (A twisted Cinderella Story)
I would like to take this time to publicly thank Silverstar for the advice. Thanks to Silverstar, my story does not look like the mess it did initially. Thank you ...
Nov 11, 2005 -
Re: Bound for Glory: Part two (Title change in works)
This is the best story you've posted on this site! Very entertaining. Their are only two things I would change. First, there is a typo. It's in there somewhere and ...
Nov 11, 2005 -
Re: Happy Halloween!
Halloween is the greatest day of the year. It's almost as good as my birthday and Independence day put together. I'm going to work dressed like Super Mario, then I'm ...
Oct 31, 2005 -
Re: I need some Ideas
The only advice I can offer you is: Keep your mind open. You never know where inspiration will come from. I'm sorry if you don't find that very helpful.
Oct 24, 2005 -
Re: Face 2 Face-maybe this is funny
My avatar is actually a candid picture of me that my friend took last week.
Oct 24, 2005
