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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Black Lake

    Well first off, I really liked this. It provided nice imagery and it was genuinely enjoyable to read. I can't say that I know exactly what you intended the metaphor ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Words

    I liked your poem, it raises a good point. Not everyone can write a poem or a story, it's a talent. I thought you got your point across nicely despite ...

    Feb 17, 2011


“Rise like Lions after slumber In unvanquishable number. Shake your chains to earth like dew Which in sleep had fallen on you— Ye are many—they are few.”
— Mary Shelly