HalfwayThere

Thank you to each and every one of you! I genuinely appreciate your feedback. I see what you're saying about corrections and whatnot. Thank you, again. :)

Aw, thank you :) This is the first one I've posted so I'm really glad that you guys liked it.

I care I am so sick Of sitting here Day after day, Week after week. Just watching, Waiting, For you to snap. When you hide Your feelings like that Keeping ...

Well first off, I really liked this. It provided nice imagery and it was genuinely enjoyable to read. I can't say that I know exactly what you intended the metaphor ...

I liked your poem, it raises a good point. Not everyone can write a poem or a story, it's a talent. I thought you got your point across nicely despite ...

Hi, I'm new to this site. Well, I guess that's a bit obvious since I'm posting this. :p I'm sixteen, I'm looking forward to reading other writers' work as well ...